Describe my village

I/ Introductory:
My village is a quiet place where the influence of the city is not felt much. It is a really good place for rest and relaxation. And as for me,both people and nature are very wonderful

II/ Body paragraph
1/ Paragraph 1:

_Topic sentence: people's wonder here is expressed by their behaviours and customs

+the people of my village are simple in thought and behaviour

+they are extremely friendly and helpful

+the people here work together and live in peace

+sometimes they celebrate a festival and they usually dance and sing together joyfully

+the crimes of the city are almost unknown in a village.

_conclusion 1:all of these help people live better

2/paragraph 2:

_Topic sentence:the same people,my village has wonderful nature by its simplicity

+each house has a lot of space around it and called garden

+in each garden, it is planted many kind of flower, fruit plants and vegetables

+the village looks green and fresh

+there are also tall trees everywhere which provide shade from sun and keep the village cool

+my village is surrounded by paddy-fields and mountain

+water of streams and river in my village are cool and pure

_conclusion 2: nature adds great beauty and variety to the village scene

III/ The whole conclusion:

Living among such friendly and simply people,in such a quiet place is indeed a real wonder

The importance of water

Introductory:
_Thesis statement:water is not only necessary for our bodies but also important for conditions of life


Body:
_paragraph 1:
Topic sentence:water is necessary for our bodies
+our bodies are composed of about 75 percent water
+water allows our blood to flow through the blood vessels
+supply the body with vital nutrients
+water allows waste matter to be eliminated from the body by means of excretory system
conclusion 1: it is vital to our body

_paragraph 2:
Topic sentence:water is important for conditions of life
+it is used for drinking, washing, cleaning such as :body, food, floor, car...
+used for farming to make land wet, for industry to produce and forestry
conclusion 2:water is part of life


The whole conclusion: without water nothing can exit so water is just too precious.we ought not to waste it or pollute by any means


Rewrite my essay: THE IMPORTANCE OF WATER

Water is one of the most important thing on the earth.Every living thing needs water for its survival.Without water, plants, animals, microbes will not exit.So water is not necessary for our body but also important for conditions of life.
First of all, water is necessary for our bodies because our bodies are composed of 75 percent water.On the other hands, water allows our blood to flow through the blood vessels thus supplying the body with vital nutrients.And it allows waste matter to be eliminated from the body by means of excretory system.when we are thirsty,our need for water becomes very apparent. We drink glasses of this transparent liquid everyday.It is vital to our bodies.
The next,water is important for conditions of life.Because it is used for drinking, washing, cleaning such as :body, food, floor, car...And it is used for farming to make land wet, for industry to produce and forestry.So without water in conditions of life, all of us can still perish
In short, without water nothing can exit. So water is just too precious.We ought not to waste it or pollute it by any means

a happy life

Introduction:
Have you ever had happiness yet? How do you feel? And i'm certain that the answer:"yes".How is a happy life? To me,happiness is only state of mind and it often linked with health.Many people believe that only rich people are happy because they have plenty of money and poor people are not.But i think it is not true because there a lot of rich people who are not happy with life.They may not have peace of mind or they may not have good heath to enjoy life.So a happy life never depends on richness or poverty

outline:
introduction:
_topic sentence: How is a happy life?
_thesis statement:a happy life never depend on richness or poverty

Body
paragraph 1:
_topic sentence:I think a happy life is pleased with property and heath at present
+if you have suitable income.you should satisfy with it.
+Don't be greedy and mean(if you are greedy and mean.you might make other people be hurt)
+ always care about people around us
+help everyone to overcome difficult life
+always live with joy,happiness and tolerance
+good behavior
_conclusion 1:"Live for yourself and everyone, bring happiness for yourself and everyone" is the most simply happiness in our life

paragraph 2:
_topic sentence:happiness is really important in life
+it helps all of us feel more comfortable and more interesting
+all of people in the world is not stressful and avoid some diseases
+we become more unity and more friendly
_conclusion 2:happiness is priceless present from life

the whole conclusion:happiness is all of joys which the life brings for us
+i think anyone still wants to have a happy life because it is priceless present from life
+to me, i hope that joy,happiness and health are always with all of you