Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009

do you agree that computer is really important for our life

Outline:
_Introduction: The same development of science and technology.Creation of computer was new success in our life. It makes human's life improved and has a high standard.So, computer is really important and useful in our life
_Body paragraph:
+topic sentence:the importance and usefulness of computer can be seen on the internet we use everyday
+examples: .we can search many imformation, using computer to find information is faster than usual
.it helps us relax after working day such as : listen to music, play game, read news
.it makes us learn many thing from it such as:practise english, see alots beatiful places everywhere
.we can get in touch with our friends and family and relatives
.besides we can make friends with other people in the internet
+counter_argument: but some people say that using computer can diminish memory and have bad influence for our health
+refustation: however its importance and usefulness are realized by meny people.Another way, it helps us a lots in life
_conclusion:computer is really impotant because it helps people a lots.In the future, using computer will provide useful and amazing new application which we can be unable to know in the present

Thứ Bảy, 21 tháng 11, 2009

unforgettable memory

Outline:

Introduction:the first time I had cooked

Body paragraph:
_paragraph 1:I went to market
+planned carefully and thought about what dishes i wanted to prepare
_paragraph 2:I started my cooking
+make a soup
+fried fish

Conclusion:that was unforgettable memory

write my essay:

My unforgettable memory about my first cooking
I was about ten or eleven years old at that time. One time ,my mother fell ill.I am the eldest girl of my family,was forced to take up my mother's duty that day and that was the first time i had cooked
First of all I had to go to the market to buy the necessary foodstuffs.I planned carefully and thought about what dishes I wanted to prepare
At about five o'clock in the afternoon I started my cooking.I cooked rice and made a soup which my mother taught me .Then I went to the next dish,fried fish.I took the fish out of the refrigator,suddenly I realized that the soup which was on the stove ,was spilling over.Quickly,I turned off the gas.Everything was in a mess.It took a long time to clean it up.After prepareing the fish.I put the pieces into the boiling oil.the oil spatterd all over my boby.That was the first time my favourite cartoon show was on .I switched on the TV and began to enjoy it but I ha forgotten about the fish.It was burnt
Anyway the dinner was ready .I served everyone .I sat down anxiously watching my brother and sister.I was shocked when everyone stood up and threw the food away.My elder brother started to laugh .My parents enjoyed laughing and finally we all had to eat out
In short,anyone had personal memory.and as for me my first cooking is unforgettable memory in this life

Thứ Sáu, 13 tháng 11, 2009

My village

My village is quiet place the influence of the city is not felt much.It is a really good place for rest and relaxation. As for me both people and nature are very wonderful.

People's wonder here is expressed by their behaviour and customs.The people of my village are simple in thought and behaviour.They are therefore very friendly and helpful.So, the crimes of the city are almost unknown in my village.The people here work together and live in peace. Whenever they celebrate a festival,they dance and sing together joyfully and the whole village is happy. All of these help people live better.
The sane people,my village has wonderful nature by its simplicity,too.In my village people do not live very close to one another.Their houses are far part. Each house therefore has a lot of space around it. So, almost every house is surrounded by flower and fruit plants and vegetables.All these make my village look green and fresh.There are also tall trees everywhere which provide shade from the sun and keep the village cool.Besides,my village is surrounded by paddy_fields and mountain,too.And water of streams and river in my village is cool and pure.Nature adds great beaty and variety to the village scene.

Living among such friendly and simple people, in such a quiet place is indeed a real wonder.