unforgettable memory

Outline:

Introduction:the first time I had cooked

Body paragraph:
_paragraph 1:I went to market
+planned carefully and thought about what dishes i wanted to prepare
_paragraph 2:I started my cooking
+make a soup
+fried fish

Conclusion:that was unforgettable memory

write my essay:

My unforgettable memory about my first cooking
I was about ten or eleven years old at that time. One time ,my mother fell ill.I am the eldest girl of my family,was forced to take up my mother's duty that day and that was the first time i had cooked
First of all I had to go to the market to buy the necessary foodstuffs.I planned carefully and thought about what dishes I wanted to prepare
At about five o'clock in the afternoon I started my cooking.I cooked rice and made a soup which my mother taught me .Then I went to the next dish,fried fish.I took the fish out of the refrigator,suddenly I realized that the soup which was on the stove ,was spilling over.Quickly,I turned off the gas.Everything was in a mess.It took a long time to clean it up.After prepareing the fish.I put the pieces into the boiling oil.the oil spatterd all over my boby.That was the first time my favourite cartoon show was on .I switched on the TV and began to enjoy it but I ha forgotten about the fish.It was burnt
Anyway the dinner was ready .I served everyone .I sat down anxiously watching my brother and sister.I was shocked when everyone stood up and threw the food away.My elder brother started to laugh .My parents enjoyed laughing and finally we all had to eat out
In short,anyone had personal memory.and as for me my first cooking is unforgettable memory in this life