Thứ Bảy, 12 tháng 12, 2009

My lifestyle and ngoc's

Each person has personal lifestyle bcause of not only difference from characters,interests,habits...but also similarities.And me,too.I am really different from many people.Especially is ngoc who is the best friend,also is admired by me.However,my lifestyle and hers also have some similarities and differences
About similarities, we like going shopping ,studying group.Especially,both of us like english and that is reason why we are the best friends
despise the similarities, she and i have some differences.for example,she is short and fat and i am not.I am both tall and slender.Iam talkative but she always less makes a noise than me.she usually thinks carefully before talking and i do not.And i admire her because of difference between her and me and because i never do like her, i really want to be her shoes
In short, our differences attract us so much so that we can share everything which iy is never boring.And our similarities help us more understand each other.Anyway,we are friends forever

Thứ Sáu, 4 tháng 12, 2009

Some people say that young generation nowadays is bad lifestyle.Do you agree with this and how far?

Modern age appears to be youth_oriented and young people are playing unceasingly an important role in society,in business or politics.So some people say that young generation nowadays is bad lifestyle is completely wrong.I think that the young are very active lifestyle.
The dymamism of young generation is valued in a lot of fields.The first, about society: the young take part in good activities such as making charity, volunteer to help the poor.So thay also learn many things from what they did .The next, about culture:they continue to keep good trandition and learn other good customs from the other countries to improve spiritual life of the people .In business,the young always create and develope economics,politics by many ways.Especialy,about economics, they go to other countries to learn and then they return own their country to serve.So now the economy is eveloping better.They are not fraid of difficulties and challeges ,even they are willing to face with them.About schooling they are also active in activities at university and hey have good method to learn and solve exercises quickly.However ,some young people imitate unhealthy lifestyle such as : drinking ,smoking and dress clothes ridiculously.But ingenerally,young generaion nowadays is really active and creative
In short, the dynamism of young generation was proved by what they did .So they still continue to learn and create and more and more develope so that tey can help own their country develope better

Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009

do you agree that computer is really important for our life

Outline:
_Introduction: The same development of science and technology.Creation of computer was new success in our life. It makes human's life improved and has a high standard.So, computer is really important and useful in our life
_Body paragraph:
+topic sentence:the importance and usefulness of computer can be seen on the internet we use everyday
+examples: .we can search many imformation, using computer to find information is faster than usual
.it helps us relax after working day such as : listen to music, play game, read news
.it makes us learn many thing from it such as:practise english, see alots beatiful places everywhere
.we can get in touch with our friends and family and relatives
.besides we can make friends with other people in the internet
+counter_argument: but some people say that using computer can diminish memory and have bad influence for our health
+refustation: however its importance and usefulness are realized by meny people.Another way, it helps us a lots in life
_conclusion:computer is really impotant because it helps people a lots.In the future, using computer will provide useful and amazing new application which we can be unable to know in the present

Thứ Bảy, 21 tháng 11, 2009

unforgettable memory

Outline:

Introduction:the first time I had cooked

Body paragraph:
_paragraph 1:I went to market
+planned carefully and thought about what dishes i wanted to prepare
_paragraph 2:I started my cooking
+make a soup
+fried fish

Conclusion:that was unforgettable memory

write my essay:

My unforgettable memory about my first cooking
I was about ten or eleven years old at that time. One time ,my mother fell ill.I am the eldest girl of my family,was forced to take up my mother's duty that day and that was the first time i had cooked
First of all I had to go to the market to buy the necessary foodstuffs.I planned carefully and thought about what dishes I wanted to prepare
At about five o'clock in the afternoon I started my cooking.I cooked rice and made a soup which my mother taught me .Then I went to the next dish,fried fish.I took the fish out of the refrigator,suddenly I realized that the soup which was on the stove ,was spilling over.Quickly,I turned off the gas.Everything was in a mess.It took a long time to clean it up.After prepareing the fish.I put the pieces into the boiling oil.the oil spatterd all over my boby.That was the first time my favourite cartoon show was on .I switched on the TV and began to enjoy it but I ha forgotten about the fish.It was burnt
Anyway the dinner was ready .I served everyone .I sat down anxiously watching my brother and sister.I was shocked when everyone stood up and threw the food away.My elder brother started to laugh .My parents enjoyed laughing and finally we all had to eat out
In short,anyone had personal memory.and as for me my first cooking is unforgettable memory in this life

Thứ Sáu, 13 tháng 11, 2009

My village

My village is quiet place the influence of the city is not felt much.It is a really good place for rest and relaxation. As for me both people and nature are very wonderful.

People's wonder here is expressed by their behaviour and customs.The people of my village are simple in thought and behaviour.They are therefore very friendly and helpful.So, the crimes of the city are almost unknown in my village.The people here work together and live in peace. Whenever they celebrate a festival,they dance and sing together joyfully and the whole village is happy. All of these help people live better.
The sane people,my village has wonderful nature by its simplicity,too.In my village people do not live very close to one another.Their houses are far part. Each house therefore has a lot of space around it. So, almost every house is surrounded by flower and fruit plants and vegetables.All these make my village look green and fresh.There are also tall trees everywhere which provide shade from the sun and keep the village cool.Besides,my village is surrounded by paddy_fields and mountain,too.And water of streams and river in my village is cool and pure.Nature adds great beaty and variety to the village scene.

Living among such friendly and simple people, in such a quiet place is indeed a real wonder.

Thứ Sáu, 30 tháng 10, 2009

Describe my village

I/ Introductory:
My village is a quiet place where the influence of the city is not felt much. It is a really good place for rest and relaxation. And as for me,both people and nature are very wonderful

II/ Body paragraph
1/ Paragraph 1:
_Topic sentence: people's wonder here is expressed by their behaviours and customs
+the people of my village are simple in thought and behaviour
+they are extremely friendly and helpful
+the people here work together and live in peace
+sometimes they celebrate a festival and they usually dance and sing together joyfully
+the crimes of the city are almost unknown in a village.
_conclusion 1:all of these help people live better
2/paragraph 2:
_Topic sentence:the same people,my village has wonderful nature by its simplicity
+each house has a lot of space around it and called garden
+in each garden, it is planted many kind of flower, fruit plants and vegetables
+the village looks green and fresh
+there are also tall trees everywhere which provide shade from sun and keep the village cool
+my village is surrounded by paddy-fields and mountain
+water of streams and river in my village are cool and pure
_conclusion 2: nature adds great beauty and variety to the village scene
III/ The whole conclusion:
Living among such friendly and simply people,in such a quiet place is indeed a real wonder

Thứ Sáu, 23 tháng 10, 2009

The importance of water

Introductory:
_Thesis statement:water is not only necessary for our bodies but also important for conditions of life


Body:
_paragraph 1:
Topic sentence:water is necessary for our bodies
+our bodies are composed of about 75 percent water
+water allows our blood to flow through the blood vessels
+supply the body with vital nutrients
+water allows waste matter to be eliminated from the body by means of excretory system
conclusion 1: it is vital to our body

_paragraph 2:
Topic sentence:water is important for conditions of life
+it is used for drinking, washing, cleaning such as :body, food, floor, car...
+used for farming to make land wet, for industry to produce and forestry
conclusion 2:water is part of life


The whole conclusion: without water nothing can exit so water is just too precious.we ought not to waste it or pollute by any means


Rewrite my essay: THE IMPORTANCE OF WATER

Water is one of the most important thing on the earth.Every living thing needs water for its survival.Without water, plants, animals, microbes will not exit.So water is not necessary for our body but also important for conditions of life.
First of all, water is necessary for our bodies because our bodies are composed of 75 percent water.On the other hands, water allows our blood to flow through the blood vessels thus supplying the body with vital nutrients.And it allows waste matter to be eliminated from the body by means of excretory system.when we are thirsty,our need for water becomes very apparent. We drink glasses of this transparent liquid everyday.It is vital to our bodies.
The next,water is important for conditions of life.Because it is used for drinking, washing, cleaning such as :body, food, floor, car...And it is used for farming to make land wet, for industry to produce and forestry.So without water in conditions of life, all of us can still perish
In short, without water nothing can exit. So water is just too precious.We ought not to waste it or pollute it by any means

Thứ Sáu, 16 tháng 10, 2009

a happy life

Introduction:
Have you ever had happiness yet? How do you feel? And i'm certain that the answer:"yes".How is a happy life? To me,happiness is only state of mind and it often linked with health.Many people believe that only rich people are happy because they have plenty of money and poor people are not.But i think it is not true because there a lot of rich people who are not happy with life.They may not have peace of mind or they may not have good heath to enjoy life.So a happy life never depends on richness or poverty

outline:
introduction:
_topic sentence: How is a happy life?
_thesis statement:a happy life never depend on richness or poverty

Body
paragraph 1:
_topic sentence:I think a happy life is pleased with property and heath at present
+if you have suitable income.you should satisfy with it.
+Don't be greedy and mean(if you are greedy and mean.you might make other people be hurt)
+ always care about people around us
+help everyone to overcome difficult life
+always live with joy,happiness and tolerance
+good behavior
_conclusion 1:"Live for yourself and everyone, bring happiness for yourself and everyone" is the most simply happiness in our life

paragraph 2:
_topic sentence:happiness is really important in life
+it helps all of us feel more comfortable and more interesting
+all of people in the world is not stressful and avoid some diseases
+we become more unity and more friendly
_conclusion 2:happiness is priceless present from life

the whole conclusion:happiness is all of joys which the life brings for us
+i think anyone still wants to have a happy life because it is priceless present from life
+to me, i hope that joy,happiness and health are always with all of you