Introduction:
Have you ever had happiness yet? How do you feel? And i'm certain that the answer:"yes".How is a happy life? To me,happiness is only state of mind and it often linked with health.Many people believe that only rich people are happy because they have plenty of money and poor people are not.But i think it is not true because there a lot of rich people who are not happy with life.They may not have peace of mind or they may not have good heath to enjoy life.So a happy life never depends on richness or poverty
outline:
introduction:
_topic sentence: How is a happy life?
_thesis statement:a happy life never depend on richness or poverty
Body
paragraph 1:
_topic sentence:I think a happy life is pleased with property and heath at present
+if you have suitable income.you should satisfy with it.
+Don't be greedy and mean(if you are greedy and mean.you might make other people be hurt)
+ always care about people around us
+help everyone to overcome difficult life
+always live with joy,happiness and tolerance
+good behavior
_conclusion 1:"Live for yourself and everyone, bring happiness for yourself and everyone" is the most simply happiness in our life
paragraph 2:
_topic sentence:happiness is really important in life
+it helps all of us feel more comfortable and more interesting
+all of people in the world is not stressful and avoid some diseases
+we become more unity and more friendly
_conclusion 2:happiness is priceless present from life
the whole conclusion:happiness is all of joys which the life brings for us
+i think anyone still wants to have a happy life because it is priceless present from life
+to me, i hope that joy,happiness and health are always with all of you
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