Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009

do you agree that computer is really important for our life

Outline:
_Introduction: The same development of science and technology.Creation of computer was new success in our life. It makes human's life improved and has a high standard.So, computer is really important and useful in our life
_Body paragraph:
+topic sentence:the importance and usefulness of computer can be seen on the internet we use everyday
+examples: .we can search many imformation, using computer to find information is faster than usual
.it helps us relax after working day such as : listen to music, play game, read news
.it makes us learn many thing from it such as:practise english, see alots beatiful places everywhere
.we can get in touch with our friends and family and relatives
.besides we can make friends with other people in the internet
+counter_argument: but some people say that using computer can diminish memory and have bad influence for our health
+refustation: however its importance and usefulness are realized by meny people.Another way, it helps us a lots in life
_conclusion:computer is really impotant because it helps people a lots.In the future, using computer will provide useful and amazing new application which we can be unable to know in the present

1 nhận xét:

  1. unity: good. a few mistakes in vocabulary such as: "meny people"," "impotant".
    in refutation, it is better if you add more details to make it more persuasive.

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